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This post was written by Tee Akindele on October 8, 2010
Posted Under: Random,Romance

Poem: Deep kiss

Your lips are like smooth pebbles
Washed out and shining on the river bank
Their parting is like the freshness
Frothing on the surface of the ocean
Calling me for a cool dip or a warm plunge
Depending on whether it’s a sunny afternoon or a chilly night.
Your tongue is like the waves
Rolling over a deep endless sea
While mine is doing a breast- or backstroke.
A deluge of rhapsody floods over me
As if I am wearing my nerves and blood vessels
Like sleeves on my skin
We are en-fused
My brain in yours
Our individuality wrapped
We can’t be broken without hurting us.

We plunge deeply but have not washed away my fear
May God save our fate with the winds of grace
This gift of a tide so strong is hard to bear
Others have drowned under it, many without count
But may it fare us to destiny that’s fair, past our doubts.

©2010, Poem by Tee Akindele

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Reader Comments

wow!taiwo this is deep…
never knew you really into poems. well done!

#1 
Written By bisi on October 9th, 2010 @ 8:35 am

Hmmm… hot! Tee. lol

My best part is the almost unspoken message. He who has an
ear, let him ear, abi?
I like!

#2 
Written By roy on October 9th, 2010 @ 1:56 pm

I’ve bn tryin 2 follow ur poems for some time now, and d truth is I’m yet 2 be disappointd with any of d pieces av read…
please kip writing,U’re gud at it.
Cheers

#3 
Written By akin on October 9th, 2010 @ 3:58 pm

@Bisi CEO, Thanks for the visit to my humble house of poetry, and I’m glad you liked it. :)
@ROY OGA MI, You are remarkably perceptive, aren’t you? Thanks again, you encourage a lot of me. :)
@Akinlabi, Thanks friend, I hope I won’t disappoint you anytime soon, but forgive me if I do. :) I appreciate your kindness however.

#4 
Written By Tee Akindele on October 9th, 2010 @ 10:06 pm

I don’t say this often, but I most confess I admire your intellect especially in your poems and notes. Keep it up. This is deep.

#5 
Written By Kayode on October 11th, 2010 @ 7:45 pm

Thanks for the visit and compliment Bro K.

#6 
Written By Tee Akindele on October 11th, 2010 @ 11:32 pm

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